*vorsichtig mit knallroten kopf reinschleich* I'm so sorry! Wie ich gestern schon sagte, hab ich es total vergessen. Und wenn du mich nicht daran erinnert hättest...
aber jetzt hab ich, wie versprochen gelesen. auch wenn das letzte mal schon ne ganze weile her ist, kann ich mich noch sehr gut daran erinnern, wie gut ich deinen schreibstil finde und das hat sich auch nicht geändert. selbst wenns in englisch ist. apropos englisch: ich hab alles verstanden.
zum 8. kapitel... der erste teil gefällt mir sehr gut. ich finde mia einfach toll und bin auch der meinung, dass du sie echt gut getroffen hast. es ist total lieb von ihr, dass sie lorelai das haus gibt. die ganze situation und auch die einleitung hast du sehr gut beschrieben, kann man sich gut bildlich vorstellen. auch der umzug selber war toll. endlich kommt mal ein wenig licht in form der box, die luke öffnet. ich find deine idee, wie du es gelöst hat gut. zu der frage wer jetzt das baby ist sag ich mal nix, da ich ja schon das gröbste kenne.
besonders gut an dem kapitel hat mir aber der traum und der abschnitt danach gefallen. wie luke zum ersten mal ihre stimme hört... seine verwunderung bis er realisiert hat, dass es lorelai sein muss, kam sehr gut rüber. die arme tut mir total leid.
zum 9. ... *schnieeeeeeeeef* (ich schreib mit, nicht wundern) *schnieeef* *durchatme* hab ich schon mal erwähnt, dass mir lore total leid tut? ich find du hast die ganze situation richtig gut beschrieben. total süà wie sich luke um sie kümmert. und endlich redet sie.
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Spoilerhast du nicht eigentlich gemeint, dass ihre ersten worte was anderes sein sollen?
die flashbacks haben an den stellen richtig gut gespasst und waren auch richtig schön geschrieben. naja nicht vom inhalt her, aber du weiÃt wie ich es meine.
Zitat:“Stop yelling, Lorelai. I told you often enough to not yell in the house. And come down here dinner will be ready soon.”
emily -.-
auch wenn ich inzwischen emily/rich ganz gerne mag, in deiner ff find ich ich sie einfach nur zum K..... wie kann sie nur? das ist doch ihr eigenes enkelkind. ihr fleisch und blut.
Zitat:After some time I just stopped talking at all. I thought if I wouldn’t talk to anybody that no one would know what’s going on with me and if no one new no one could hurt me again. My parents tried so hard sometimes to get me to talk but I didn’t. Especially not to them. And the day I ran away from home and came here
Zitat:“No, you’re not crazy, Lorelai. You’re absolutely not crazy. You had every right to not talk anymore. Your own parents took your baby from you. I still can’t believe that someone can be this cruel. And I swear, your parents can be happy that I not know where they live or they would have a serious problem now. You just have to know that I’m here for you. I’m on your side supporting you in whatever will happen. You’re not alone, okay?” Lorelai gave him a teary smile and nodded.
“I know, Luke but it hurts so much. It really hurts that my baby is out there somewhere and I don’t even know what she looks like. I’m not there for her first smile, her first laugh, her first word, tooth, step or her first day at kindergarten. I don’t see her growing up. She’s a part of me and it is like a part of me is missing and doing its own thing without me knowing. It just hurts so much!” Luke wrapped his arms back around her midsection and hugged a crying Lorelai to his body.
“I know it hurts, honey, I know.”
diese beiden absätze gehören zu meinen lieblingsstellen. ich kann dir leider nicht so wirklich erklären warum, aber ich find die einfach nur wow.
ich hoffe bald geht es weiter (und auch wenn ich nicht grad der allergröÃte rory fan bin, würde ich es (für lore) schön finden, wenn sie sie mal treffen könnte oder zumindestens erfahren würde, wie es rory geht)
:knuddel: mel
PS: :herz: :herz: :herz:
JJ :herz: :herz: :herz: (das musste mal raus XD)
Danke für euer FB
Auch wenn das hier kaum noch einer lesen tut dacht ich mir sollte ich doch noch das letzte kapi posten... also bitte: (muss das kapi in zwei posts packen, da es für einen zu lang is
Chapter 10
The next morning when Lorelai woke up she found the space next to her empty. She rolled onto her back and took a deep breath. Somehow she felt lighter. It was as if a mighty rock has been removed from her heart. And now the only thing she could do was smile.
Lorelai threw the blankets aside and got up. While she put her hair into a ponytail she left her bedroom and started her way down the stairs. She stopped at the entrance to the kitchen and leaned against the wall.
Luke was in the kitchen making breakfast. He didnât notice Lorelai watching him from the doorway. But Lorelai just couldnât help herself. Luke was her hero⦠kind of. He had been the first person she had started to really trust again. He had been the first person she had talked to again. He had been the person who took a lot of her pain away. And she had the feeling that heâs the first person sheâd really love. But before she could continue with that thought she was interrupted by Lukeâs voice.
âOh, hey, good morningâ, he said a little insecure. He just didnât know what was going to happen now. Would she continue talking or close up again. Would they be able to talk about her past more freely now or not? There was so much he was unsure about.
âMorningâ, she answered coming into the kitchen. Luke let go of a breath he didnât know he was holding. She was still talking.
âI made you breakfastâ, he said pointing at the scrambled eggs that were still in the pan and the pancakes piled up on a plate.
âI can see thatâ, she said coming up behind him and snuggling up against his back. Luke smiled and intertwined his fingers with hers for a moment.
âAnd coffee is ready as well.â At that Lorelai perked up.
âoh, goodie.â Lorelai walked over to the coffee maker and filled a cup with her black love. Luke just shook his head.
âYou know, that stuff can kill youâ, he said but Lorelai just smiled at him.
âItâs totally worth itâ, she just answered him and sat down at the kitchen table. Luke started to set the table for breakfast and then sat down as well. They both sat in a comfortable silence for a while enjoying their breakfast until Luke broke it again.
âSo, you going to work today?â, he asked looking up at Lorelai. She chewed the last bite of her pancakes and drowned it with a sip of her coffee.
âYeah, I mean, nothing has changed, so why wouldnât I go?â Luke looked at her with raised eyebrows.
âA lot has changed and you know it.â Lorelai looked up to him and smiled. She took his hand that was lying on the table and started to draw soft circles on his palm with her fingers.
âYouâre right, Luke, a lot has changed for me. Maybe even for you. But it doesnât change anything at the inn. It only makes it easier.â Luke nodded his head and lifted their intertwined hands to his lips, kissing the back of her hand.
âIâd like to take you out on Saturday, you free?â He asked, smiling at her. Lorelai just smiled back and nodded her head.
The next hour was spent with cleaning the dishes, taking a shower and changing into work clothes. Lorelai decided against Lukeâs offer to drive her to the inn and told him that she wanted to walk. They kissed goodbye and Luke drove his truck back to the Diner.
Lorelai stood on her porch taking a deep breath. So much had changed in such a short amount of time. She had come here with nothing and now around five months later she had a job, a house, a lot of new friends and a wonderful boyfriend who helped her to start talking again. Who helped her to trust again.
She sighed a happy sigh and started her walk into town. It was a beautiful day in May. The sun was shining and it was slowly starting to get warmer again. You could see people all around town who were doing their usual morning things. Parents bringing their kids to school or kindergarten. People on their way to work or to Lukeâs or Westonâs for breakfast. While Lorelai looked around she clearly remembered the day she got here. When she had seen this town she had thought that it looked like one of those picture-perfect towns and now she knew that it didnât just look like it.
Ms. Patty was staying on the top step of her dance studio smoking her usual morning cigarette and watching the townies when Lorelai walked by.
âGood morning, Lorelaiâ, she greeted her as usual and expecting her usual hand wave and smile as answer but she didnât expect Lorelai to answer with a âmorning Pattyâ. Patty dropped her cigarette in shock and starred after Lorelai. Did she really just hear what she thought she had heard? It couldnât be possible, could it?
When Patty came back to her senses Lorelai was already out of sight. With her mouth agape she reached into one of her big pockets, took her cell phone out of it and frantically started to type in a number. After a few rings someone picked up.
âBabette, you will never believe what just happened!â
While Patty was still in shock Lorelai reached the inn and entered it through the kitchen door. Sookie was leaning against the middle counter with a bowl in her hand and stirring its content permanently while counting her stirs. Lorelai thought she would just say something and see how Sookie would react.
âMorning Sookieâ, she tried it the easiest way but didnât get more than a grunt as response. She frowned and tried it again.
âI said, good morning Sookie.â
âyeah, yeah, I heard yaâ she answered trying to concentrate on her counting again by counting out loud. Lorelai got frustrated.
âCould you please focus for a second, Sookie?â, she asked.
âI am focusing. Iâm focusing on how much I have stirred this yet.â Lorelai growled, took the spoon and the bowl out of Sookieâs hand and started to stir it for her counting the stirs out loud from where Sookie had stopped. At first Sookie was totally perplexed that someone just took her bowl out of her hand but then she looked up and saw Lorelai stirring and counting out loud.
âOh my godâ, Sookie whispered, covering her mouth with her hands. She looked at Lorelai a little closer as if sheâd see her for the first time.
âOh my god, oh my godâ, she screeched this time and threw herself at Lorelai. Lorelai let the bowl fall to the ground in the progress and started to laugh when her friend gave her a bone crashing hug.
âSookie, youâre crushing meâ, Lorelai said still laughing. Sookie let Lorelai go and looked at her in awe.
âOh my god, youâre talking. What⦠I mean, how did that happen?â Lorelai smiled at her.
âIâm not ready yet to tell you what caused it. Just be happy that it happened, okay?â Sookie just nodded and hugged her again.
Ten minutes, five âoh my godâs and two more hugs later Lorelai had been able to leave the kitchen. She was now standing in front of Miaâs office. This one wouldnât be as easy. She had so much to say to Mia. So much to thank her for. Lorelai took a deep breath and knocked. When she heard Mia call her in she opened the door and stepped in.
âGood morning, Lorelai.â Mia said in her usual friendly voice. Lorelai just smiled at her. Why not leave her hanging a little.
âDo you have a reason why you came here?â Mia asked her and Lorelai nodded. Mia pointed at the chair on the other side of her desk for Lorelai to sit in. She sat down opposite of Mia and for a moment there was silence while both women watched each other. They both had their forearms on the desk and were leaning on them. Lorelai took another deep breath and then slowly started.
âMia, there is a lot I have to say to you. At first I want to thank you for everything you did for me in the last five months. You met this strange girl who didnât talk who you didnât know at all but you still took her in and gave her a job. Gave her a home. Not everyone would do that. To be honest, there is probably hardly anyone whoâd do that. But still, you did it. You took me in and gave me a new home. You made it possible for me to start a new life. I met a lot of wonderful people through you. People that are now my friends. And as if that wouldnât be enough already you also gave me your house for almost nothing. Mia, I just donât know how to thank you enough.â During her little speech Lorelai had held eye contact with Mia and both women had now tears in their eyes. After a minute of silence Mia got up, walked around the desk and came to a halt in front of Lorelaiâs chair. Lorelai looked up to her and then stood up as well. Mia gave her a teary smile and just took Lorelai into her arms. Both women just stood there hugging each other for a while until Mia broke the embrace.
âYou donât need to thank me. Just do me a favor and never close up like that again, okay?â Lorelai gave her a teary smile and nodded.
Lorelaiâs day went on smoothly. When Michel had found out that she was talking she had whished to have a camera. His face had been priceless when she had greeted him with a âMorning, French guy.â It was so much fun to tease him. Even more now.
Around lunch Lorelai was done with her shift and thought sheâd go and visit her boyfriend. Maybe sheâd be able to get an extra large piece of pie today. As she strolled through town she was lost in thought again. She still couldnât believe that she was talking again. She had always thought that sheâd never talk again because she was sure that sheâd never be able to trust someone again. But she trusted Luke. Completely.
While Lorelai was on her way to the diner Luke thought he was going crazy. The whole town was in the Diner gathered around four or five tables they had pushed into one corner. Theyâd been there all morning, whispering and shooting him weird looks every now and then. If theyâd at least order something but no, they only ordered a cup of coffee or tea every now and then.
He was starting to wipe the counter a little aggressively trying to block out the lunatic townsfolk when the bell over the door started to ring and the whole diner went quiet. Luke looked up and saw that Lorelai had just entered and everyone in the diner was starring at them. Luke looked from Lorelai over to the townspeople and back to Lorelai who was smiling at him. Lorelai walked over to the counter, all eyes following her.
âHey babeâ, she said before she leaned over the counter and gave him a short kiss.
âHow was your day so far?â, she asked and suddenly the whole diner was buzzing again. Luke and Lorelai turned to the big table in the corner seeing that everyone was again whispering like crazy. Luke raised and eyebrow and Lorelai just shrugged. She sat down on a stool at the counter and Luke automatically filled a cup of coffee. Placing it on the counter in front of her and leaned closer to her.
âI swear, theyâre driving me crazyâ, he whispered as well âthey have been here all morning doing nothing than whispering to each other. They donât even order anything. This is my business for godâs sake. Do they think itâs good for my business when they take over almost all of my tables and donât order anything?â Lorelai put her elbows on the counter, rested her chin in her hands and smiled at Luke. He looked over at her and frowned.
âWhat?â, he asked confused.
âNothing, just go on.â Luke straightened up and put his hand on his hips.
âTell me why youâre looking at me like this.â He demanded.
âLuke, calm down. I just like hearing you rant like that.â Luke relaxed again and leaned against the counter.
âSorryâ, he said, taking Lorelaiâs hand âtheyâre just making me nervous. I have no idea what theyâre talking about.â Lorelai smiled and gently stroke his hand.
âDonât worry babe. Look at them⦠in the middle of all of them are Patty and Babette. You know them. Theyâre best at gossiping. And I bet you that theyâre making up stories about how and why I started speaking again. But if this still makes you nervous I suggest you start thinking about that date Saturday night that you promised me.â
And Saturday night came pretty fast. Luke hadnât told her where he was taking her just that she should dress up. She had been nagging him about it all week but he didnât say a word. But Lorelai was extremely fidgety today. She didnât know why. It wasnât as if it was their first date but somehow she had the feeling that this date was gonna be something special.
Lorelai looked at herself in the mirror. She was wearing one of the rare fancy dresses she had because she didnât have enough money to buy more. It was a black low cut v-neck dress that reached her knees and was flowing nicely around her legs. Her hair was down and curly. She was just fastening a necklace around her neck when the doorbell rang. Taking one last look at the mirror she started her way down the stairs and to the front door. When she opened the door her breath caught in her throat. Luke looked absolutely stunning. He was wearing a dark blue suit with a white dress shirt under it. The first three buttons of the shirt were open and she could see his chest. His face was freshly shaved and his head was cap-less. Lorelai was totally mesmerized and only when she had felt Luke putting an arm around her waist did she come back to reality.
She pressed herself against him and put one had on his chest, playing with the soft hair sticking out of the open collar.
âWow, you look so handsomeâ, she said looking up into his eyes.
âAnd you look absolutely beautifulâ, Luke said, pulling her closer.
âThanks, but I knowâ, she joked and Luke just laughed and kissed her hello.
âHiâ, he whispered when they broke apart but Lorelai just kissed him again. After a few more kisses Luke pushed her away a little and Lorelai pouted.
âLetâs get going, okay?â, he asked and Lorelai nodded. They drove in a comfortable silence. While Lorelai was trying to figure out where they were going Luke just enjoyed her company. After about twenty minutes Luke stopped the truck in front of an old but beautiful building. It looked a little like an old country building and there was a big sign over the door that said âSniffyâsâ. Luke walked around the truck and opened the door for Lorelai. Hand in hand they walked over to the building. Opening the door, Luke led her in with his hand on the small of her back. Without waiting for someone to seat them he gently guides her toward a round-tabled booth.
âYour table, missâ, he said.
âOh. Why, thank you, sirâ, Lorelai said and he removed his jacket and put it aside as they both slid into the booth and sat. Lorelai noticed a small sign on the table.
âReservedâ, She said impressed.
âI told you I'd planned the evening.â
âWeren't we supposed to let someone who works here seat us?â
âNot necessary.â
âIs this like a Mafia thing?â
âExcuse me?â
âThe whole coming in, special table, reserved sign. Are you gonna have to whack someone before the soup course?â
âNo, I've filled my whacking quota for the week.â Luke cringed when he realized what he said.
âDirty?â he asked and Lorelai shot him a wicked grin.
âExtremely!â
âThought so.â
âLukas!â They suddenly heard someone shout and an older woman walked up to their table with menus in her hand.
âHow you doing, Maisy?â, Luke asked, looking at the woman.
âYou just seat yourself now?â, Maisy asked him.
âI told him!â, Lorelai threw in. Luke stood up and gave Maisy a warm hug.
âWe run a nice place here, Lucas, not like that hash joint of yours. And this must be your young lady. Hello, there. I'm Maisy.â, Maisy said, turning from Luke to Lorelai and both women shook hands.
âHi. I'm Lorelai. I love your place.â
âIt used to be a whorehouse.â
âOh - my.â
âI like that it's got a tardy history. The best places do.â
âAnd the best people.â
â'The best people'. I like that.â, Maisy said and turned around.
âBuddy!â, she called out loud and then shooed Luke.
âWill you sit down?â
âWell, you pulled me upâ, Luke said and sat down again. An older man walks up to their table.
âBuddy, this is Lorelaiâ, Maisy introduced and Buddy looked over to her.
âLorelai. Well, hello, Lorelai.â Lorelai shook Buddyâs hand and answered with a nice
âHello, Buddy.â
âThis is very exciting for us because Lucas never brings his girls hereâ, Maisy said and Luke tried to hide his embarrassment.
âLori, some sparkling water and champagneâ She yelled to one of her waitresses.
âAnd a beerâ, Luke ordered.
âYou're on a date, you drink champagne. You're at a ball game, you drink a beer.â
âMy goodness, what a big menuâ, Lorelai interrupted them.
âDon't bother looking. Whatever you order, they'll just bring you something differentâ, Luke told her. He had experienced it a lot of times.
âHey, what about the, uh ââ, Maisy gestured with her hands in Buddyâs direction with thoughts about what to bring Luke and Lorelai for dinner.
âOh, yeah, good. With garlic and ââ. Buddy immediately knew what Maisy meant but she interrupted him.
âNo, no, no garlic. I mean, give the boy a chanceâ, she said and Buddy went back into the kitchen a little disappointed.
âLorelai, nice to meet you, and, uh, he's a special one, this guyâ, Maisy said, gesturing to Luke with her head.
âThat's the word on the streetâ, Lorelai answered and Maisy followed her husband.
âThey know you.â Lorelai said to Luke, trying to suppress a chuckle.
âActually, I come here two, three times a week. Yeah -- breakfast, dinner, whenever I have the time and am not eating with you.â
âOh, my God, Luke has a 'Luke's'.â
âYeah, well, y'know. I've known Maisy and Bud my whole life. Maisy went to school with my mother.â
âReally?â, Lorelai asked interested in Lukeâs past.
âYeah. And then four years ago when my dad died and I wanted to turn the hardware store into a diner, you know, Buddy really helped me out.â
âThat's so nice.â
âHe's a good guy. He really showed me how to run a restaurant, how to order -- everything, basically. I mean, I couldn't have done it without him.â Lorelai just smiled at him and looked around.
âI love this placeâ
âIt's a great place -- very old.â
âHow long have they owned it?â
âActually, the story of that is on the back of the menu.â
âOh, coolâ, Lorelai said, flipped open the menu and cleared her throat. âOh, look -- "Sniffy's Tavern: A story of love", she started to read. âOh, a story of love. "Maisy Fortnerand Bertram 'Buddy' Linds met at a high-school basketball game. She was playing, he was not. They fell in love, got married. Buddy went to work at a dairy, and Maisy worked at the school, but they dreamed to someday own a restaurant so that all of their friends and family could come and eat and visit and laugh with them every single day." Lorelai read the first part.
âBuddy hated working at that dairyâ, Luke commented.
Lorelai continued to read: "One day Sniffy, their beloved dog, ran away. Maisy and Buddy searched high and low for him. Finally they stumbled past a dilapidated old tavern that had been boarded up for years. They heard a dog howling. They forced open the door, and there was Sniffy, stuck underneath a fallen beam. Maisy and Buddy pulled Sniffy free and rushed him to the vet, where he immediately went into emergency surgery." Oh my God, did Paul Thomas Anderson write this? Edit, peopleâ, Lorelai commented the part she had just read.
âYou don't have to read the whole thing. There's not gonna be a quizâ, Luke said but didnât mind reading her at all. It was just so nice to hear her voice. He was still not really used to it yet so he enjoyed every second of it.
âI'm almost doneâ, Lorelai said and continued reading: Four hours later... Sniffy was dead." Sniffy was dead?! Are you serious? Where's the happy ending?â, Lorelai exclaimed and put the menu down. Luke just shrugged.
âWell, that's what happened.â
âWell, people don't read the back of the menu to find out what really happened. They read the back of the menu to be happy, to be uplifted. That's why they read the back of the menu.â
âNot that many people read the back of the menu.â A waitress came to their table and poured champagne into two glasses for them.
âDid you know about the whole Sniffy thing?â Lorelai asked the waitress and she just nodded.
âIf it makes you feel better, Sniffy was 150,000 years old.â Luke said and Lorelai feigned a pout.
âYouâre lying!â Luke just grinned and handed Lorelai a glass of champagne.
âThank youâ, Lorelai said, taking the glass from him.
âHey, here's to youâ, Luke said, raising his glass and Lorelai smiled.
âI'll drink to that.â They both took a sip.
âYep, I definitely hate champagne.â Luke said, making a disgusted face and putting the glass down. Lorelai put her glass down as well and looked at Luke.
âThis is niceâ, She said, looking into his eyes.
âGood.â They both starred into each others eyes for a few seconds.
âHey, do you remember the first time we met?â Lorelai asked him suddenly.
âWhat?â
âI'm just trying to remember the first time we met. I mean, it hasnât been that long.â Luke nodded to tell her that he remembered.
âIt was at Luke's, it was at lunch, it was a very busy day, the place was packed, and this person ââ Lorelai gasped.
âOoh, is it me? Is it me?â
âThis person comes tearing into the place with Mia on her heels.â
âOoh, it's me.â
âAnd without looking where she was going she bumped into me. I tried to keep my balance but it was too late. We both fell on the ground and she landed on top of me. I got up and started complaining about her not paying attention.â
âY'know, I bet she took that very well, 'cause she sounds just delightful.â
âWhen I looked at the person I immediately stopped complaining. I had never seen this young woman before but she fascinated me. Her shiny hair, falling over her shoulders in brown curls, and her beautiful face made her look like a princess. Her eyes were the most enchanting thing. I was sure that I had never seen such blue and oratorical eyes before.â
âOh, wowâ, Lorelai whispered, blushing a little bit.
âIâm not done with my story yet.â Lorelai frowned. That was exactly how they met. What else had happened that he would tell her? She heard Luke talking again and concentrated on him.
âThe only thing abnormal about her was that she didnât say a word. But I didnât care. I liked her and so I became friends with her. One day she came into my diner, crying, her eyes all red and puffy. I took her up to my apartment and just comforted her and when we went back down she wrote âThanksâ on a piece of paper.â Luke grabbed his wallet out of his back pocket and took a small piece of paper out of it which he handed to Lorelai.
âI put it in my pocket and later on into my wallet because it was a big step for her and I was the first one she ever wrote something to.â Lorelai starred at the piece of paper in her hand. She couldnât believe he had kept it. She looked up into his eyes and he saw happy tears glistening in them.
âYou kept this in your wallet?â, she asked him for confirmation.
âThe whole timeâ, he answered, taking he hands in his. Both their hands were playing with the small piece of paper until Lorelai looked up again.
âLuke?â, she asked, almost whispering.
âYeah?â, he said looking back up into her eyes. Lorelai took a deep breath.
âI love you!â It was out. She had said it. For the first time in her life she had told someone âI love youâ and for the first time in her life she really felt that way. A smile started to spread on Lukeâs face and he cupped her face in his hands without breaking the eye contact.
âI love you, too, Lorelaiâ, he said and now Lorelai started to smile too. They both leaned closer until their lips met in a gentle kiss. It was a slow and tender kiss until Luke started to run his tongue over Lorelaiâs bottom lip and she just couldnât stop herself from inviting him in. Their tongues were dancing around each other, sending Goosebumps through Lorelaiâs body every time they touched. Neither of them heard the waitress approach until she cleared her throat. Luke and Lorelai both blushed and looked away.
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fortsetzung folgt imnächsten post...
Later that night they were walking hand in hand through town. Luke had parked his truck at the diner and they were walking their way back to Lorelai’s house.
“Oh come on, it was fun”, Lorelai exclaimed.
“No, it was embarrassing!”
“No, I think she did that on purpose”, Lorelai said laughing.
“What? You think the waitress waited for us to make out every time just so she can interrupt us?”
“Yep! Why else would she have run into us making out five out of six times?”
“Coincidence”, Luke said and Lorelai laughed.
“Of course, babe, let your innocent mind believe that”, Lorelai said, still laughing and patting his arm with her free hand. They walked the rest of the way in silence. When they reached Lorelai’s house they immediately made their way up the stairs and prepared for bed.
Lorelai was lying in bed, flipping through a magazine, waiting for Luke to come out of the bathroom and join her in bed. A few minutes later she heard the water of the sink stop and he made his way over to the bed.
“Hey Luke?”, Lorelai asked the second time this night.
“Yeah?”, he answered again while putting his wallet on the bedside table and taking his watch off.
“Thank you for dinner. Tonight was wonderful.”
“You’re welcome”, Luke said and climbed into bed with her. He leaned over and gave her a short goodnight kiss but when they broke apart there was something that wouldn’t let them go quiet yet. So Lorelai just kissed him again, deeper this time. What better thing is there than a little making out before bedtime?
After some time Lorelai’s mouth wandered from Luke’s lips to his earlobe. His breath caught in his throat when Lorelai slowly sucked it into her mouth and gently bit on it. Lorelai kissed her way over his jaw and down to his neck. Luke’s hands found their way under her shirt and when Lorelai felt Luke’s hands on her bare back she knew that this wasn’t enough anymore. She wanted more. Her hands found the way under his shirt and slowly started to pull it up and over his head. Luke couldn’t move for a few seconds. Was she doing what he thought she was doing? When she started to kiss her way over his chest down to his belly button he knew he had thought right. He pulled her up again and looked into her eyes.
“Are you sure you wanna do this?”, he asked her. Lorelai smiled at him and kissed him again.
“I’m sure”, she said but before she could continue bathing him in kisses he had pulled her up again.
“Really? You know you don’t have to. We can still wait –“ but Lorelai had silenced him with a finger on his lips.
“Just shut up, okay?” And that was what he did. He put his arms around her and flipped them over, so that he was on top and now it was his turn to kiss her senseless. While his lips worked their way down her throat to her chest his hands where going the other direction. He slowly moved them up her stomach until he touched the underside of her breasts, pushing her shirt up in the progress. Lorelai moaned when she felt his hands brushing against her breasts and automatically lifted her arms up for him to remove her shirt. When he had removed it he started to trail kisses over her chest, the valley between her breasts and over her stomach to her belly button. Lorelai sank her hands into his hair. Every kiss and every touch felt like little fires on her skin and she couldn’t stop herself from moaning his name.
These feelings were new. Whenever Christopher had touched her it hadn’t felt like this. It had almost felt like nothing. But this was amazing. Luke’s hands on her body made her feel like flying on a cloud. She could really feel the million butterflies in her stomach. And he hadn’t even touched the more important parts yet. Lorelai was totally relaxed and enjoyed each and every touch.
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Afterwards they were lying cuddled up together in bed. Luke had already fallen asleep but Lorelai’s thoughts kept her awake. She was thinking about herself. About her time before her pregnancy, the time after the pregnancy and the time now. Lorelai had been a troubled kid. She was the cool kid at school, had the cool boyfriend and did exactly the opposite of what her parents expected from her. Back then she thought that was who she really was supposed to be. She wasn’t meant to be one of those rich, snobby kids. Lorelai still thought that she wasn’t meant to be like hr parents but she wasn’t supposed to be such a trouble maker either. When she thought about the time after the pregnancy it was clear to her that it totally wasn’t herself but it was still the right thing to do because not talking hand kept her away from getting hurt. But when she thought about now she knew she had found her real self. Alive, happy, crazy, confident, outgoing, caring and coffee addicted.
And all this because she finally felt loved.
THE END
Es wird zu dieser story definitiv ein Sequel geben aber ich weià noch nich ob ich das hier posten werde, da sich hier anscheinend ja eh kaum einer dafür interessiert...
Falls ich mich entscheiden sollte dass hier nich zu posten kann ich euch aber immer noch den FF.net link geben...
So, hier ist dein versprochenes Feedback, Julie...
Und achtung, es wird lange, ich brauche ablenkung.
Ich fand das Chapter wirklich super. Super geschrieben, Plot was funny and serious at the same time... nicely done...
Hier meine Faves...
Jule schrieb:Somehow she felt lighter. It was as if a mighty rock has been removed from her heart. And now the only thing she could do was smile.
Super geschrieben und nachvollziehbar...
Zitat:He had been the person who took a lot of her pain away. And she had the feeling that he’s the first person she’d really love.
how cute is that?? Und Luke ist ja auch der beste (C-monster ist einfach zu doof)
Zitat: When Patty came back to her senses Lorelai was already out of sight. With her mouth agape she reached into one of her big pockets, took her cell phone out of it and frantically started to type in a number. After a few rings someone picked up.
“Babette, you will never believe what just happened!”
While Patty was still in shock Lorelai reached the inn and entered it through the kitchen door
So fun xD Excellent getroffen! Genauso wuerde es aussehen, ich kann Patty vor mir sehen.
Genauso wie Sookie... super.
Dann Lorelai's speech to Mia... It really was... I dunno... And Mia was just Mia (you now I love her xD)
The crowd at Luke's... hilarious.
The scene at Sniffy's really was cute. I liked how you changed it.
Zitat:These feelings were new. Whenever Christopher had touched her it hadn’t felt like this. It had almost felt like nothing. But this was amazing. Luke’s hands on her body made her feel like flying on a cloud. She could really feel the million butterflies in her stomach. And he hadn’t even touched the more important parts yet. Lorelai was totally relaxed and enjoyed each and every touch.
Das ist richtig so... auch super geschrieben!
Zitat:When she thought about the time after the pregnancy it was clear to her that it totally wasn’t herself but it was still the right thing to do because not talking hand kept her away from getting hurt. But when she thought about now she knew she had found her real self. Alive, happy, crazy, confident, outgoing, caring and coffee addicted.
And all this because she finally felt loved.
Best end ever.
So cool, great, [insert any superlative you want]
I wanna thank you for a great FF and I definitely want a sequel!
Love, Cedric
