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Geschrieben von: Shubya
11.11.2004, 10:12
Forum: Abgebrochene FanFictions
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Hallo Leute,
ich hab mir heute mal überlegt, das ich ne eigene page mache, nur mit FanFictions von Gilmore Girls...!

Deswegen möchte ich euch fragen:
Wessen FanFictions dürfte ich auf die Seite stellen?

Julia

Meldet euch entweder hier oder per mail: Gilmoregirls-fan1449@web.de

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Geschrieben von: Fauna
10.11.2004, 21:03
Forum: Abgebrochene FanFictions
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Hallo Leute!

Viele von euch wünschen sich , wie ich , ein Happyend für Rory und Jess. Da hab ich mir gedacht , da ich so wieso eine FF mal schreiben wollte über die zwei , dann mach ich doch gleich eine ganz besondere. Bin gleich fertig mit Teil 1 und teil 2 ist auch schon in arbeit!

Viel Spaß beim lesen!


Teil 1
Teil 2
Teil 3
Teil 4
Teil 5


NEWS-NEWS-NEWS-NEWS - 6.5. 2006

Teil 5 ist fertig!


Bye
Anika

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Geschrieben von: *GGLOVE*
10.11.2004, 19:05
Forum: Abgebrochene FanFictions
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So mach jetzt auch mal eine eigene FF! ist meine erste und desshalb bitte nicht so hart sein! Freue mich übe rjeden Kommi und wenn ihr wollt schreibe ich auch weiter!!!

[Bild: MyOwnFFBanner.jpg]

Die FF spielt ungefähr in der 6-7 staffel, obwohl es die 5 nicht gibt, weil ich die nicht kenne!!!
Ihr müsst nichts vorneweg wissen, weil alles erklärt wird!!!
(bitte nicht fragen, wer sarah ist, wird alles noch erklärt!!!)


so und ab jetzt ist die FF zum nachlesen auch bei ff.net hochgeladen:

It's just my wish

Jetzt gehts erst mal los:

"Ich geh zuerst weg!" schrie Rory, als sie Jess erblickte, wandte sich in die entgegengesetzte Richtung und begann zu rennen. Völlig überrascht rannte Jess ihr hinterher und rief "Rory! Warte! Stop!".
Sie drehte sich nicht um, sie blieb nicht stehen, sie wollte einfach nur von ihm weg. "Du hast kein Recht wegzugehen!" schrie sie, ohne zu wissen, wie weit Jess von ihr weg war. Er rief noch einmal nach ihr "Warte doch!" -"Meine Stadt, ich lass dich stehen." Antwortete sie nur und rannte immer schneller, obwohl sie wusste, dass Jess sie irgendwann einholen würde. Langsam begannen die Leute sich nach ihnen um zu drehen, doch es kümmerte sie nicht. Sie versuchte noch schneller zu rennen, damit sie ihn nicht hören musste, als er wieder schrie "Ich möchte nur ... wo willst du hin?", er wusste nicht was sie da tat, was er da tat, was sie beide da taten. Aber es war egal und wenn es sein musste, würde er ihr noch die ganze Nacht hinterher laufen, nur damit er mit ihr sprechen konnte. "Das geht dich überhaupt nichts an!" Hörte er sie schreien, während er sich bemühte sie einzuholen, was schwieriger war, als er gedacht hatte.
"Wir sehen wie Idioten aus!" schrie er, als er bemerkte, wie viele Leute die beiden inzwischen anstarrten. "Ist mir egal!" schrie sie zurück und schlug einen Haken um einen Stand. "Bleib stehen!" rief er noch einmal und endlich kam er ihr ein Stück näher. Sie schien es zu merken, denn sie rief "Lauf mir nicht nach!" und schlug noch einen Haken. "Hör doch auf!" versuchte er sie dazu zu bringen, stehen zu bleiben, doch sie hörte nicht auf ihn, rannte immer weiter und schrie "Lass mich in Ruhe, ich verschwinde,". Er würde sie noch ein letztes Mal rufen und dann stehen bleiben und gehen. Doch diesmal drehte sie sich um als er "Rory! Stop!" rief und sie wurde langsamer. "Wieso?" sagte sie und schrie nicht mehr, da er jetzt nah genug bei ihr war, um sie auch so zu verstehen. "Weil ich mit dir reden will." war seine knappe Antwort, doch diese 6 einfachen Wörter ließen sie innehalten und er bremste direkt neben. "Und worüber? Worüber willst du mit mir reden?" fragte sie nur und senkte den Blick um ihm nicht in die Augen schauen zu müssen. "Seit wann kannst du denn so schnell rennen?" fragte er sie, als hätte sie nichts gesagt und beugte sich ein wenig nach vorne, um Luft zu holen.
"Weißt du, ich hab schon oft über diesen Augenblick nachgedacht. Was wird Jess sagen, wenn wir uns wiedersehen, damals ist er einfach verschwunden. Kein Zettel, kein Anruf. Gar nichts. Kann er das irgendwie erklären?! Und dann vergeht ein Jahr. Kein Wort. Immer noch nichts. Und dafür gibt’s ja wohl kaum ne gute Entschuldigung, oder?! Ich hab mir an die hundert Varianten vorgestellt und wahrscheinlich ebenso viele großartige Abschiedsworte, und wenn ich ganz ehrlich sein soll, bin ich wahnsinnig neugierig in welche Richtung das jetzt wohl geht." sagte sie, wurde langsam lauter und funkelte ihn zornig an. "Können wir uns setzen?" fragte er und richtete sich wieder auf, doch sie wollte sich nicht setzten! Sie wollte nicht hier stehen! Sie wollte nicht mit Jess reden! Sie wollte ihn eigentlich überhaupt nie wieder sehen! Warum war er zurück gekommen? fragte sie sich und antwortete nur ""Nein, du wolltest doch reden, also rede. Was hast du mir noch mitzuteilen?", ein langes Schweigen trat ein und sie stand immer noch mit wütendem Gesichtsausdruck da und funkelte ihn an. Er holte ein paar mal tief Luft bevor er sich dazu durchrang und sagt: "Ich lieb-"


Rory schrak hoch, öffnete ihre Augen und stütze sich auf ihre Ellenbogen. Ein kurzer Blick auf die Uhr verriet ihr, dass es 4:30Uhr morgens war und so stand sie langsam auf, zog einen Morgenmantel über ihr Nachthemd, schlüpfte in ihre weichen Pantoffeln und schlurfte langsam in die Küche. Dort schüttete sie Wasser in die Kaffe Maschine, nahm sich einen Filter, holte die Kaffee - Dose aus dem Schrank, schnappte sich einen Löffel und zählte 6 Löffel von dem braunem Pulver in den Filter ab. Dann machte sie die Filterklappe zu und schaltete die Maschine an.
Gleich nach dem das erste Geräusch ertönt war, hörte sie von oben ein gedämpftes
"Was ist los? Es ist noch mitten in der Nacht" von Lorelai und gleich darauf ein paar Füße, die, die Treppe herunterkamen, zu ihr in die Küche gingen und eine Männerstimme, die rief
"Was ist los, Rory?"


So das wars erst mal, nicht besonders lang, aber wenn ihr wollt, kann ich heute noch weiter schreiben!!!

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Geschrieben von: Christine
10.11.2004, 17:29
Forum: GG Charaktere
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Hi Wink
Habt ihr schon mal gedacht dass Lane und Zack ein Paar werden??Vielleicht in der 5.Staffel?
Bei einer Folge da hat sie mal so traurig geschaut wie er mit 2 Mädels weggegangen ist!Ich denke mal dass Lane auf Zack steht..... Wink
Kann das sein, dass sie mal ein Paar werden... Wub

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Geschrieben von: MissLilli
10.11.2004, 14:49
Forum: Abgebrochene FanFictions
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Für die, die ganz neu dazugekommen sind

Die komplette Story als Word Dokument Smile

Für die, die einen Teil verpasst haben
Links: (öffnet ein neues Fenster Wink)

Teil II

Teil III

Teil IV

Teil V

Teil VI

Teil VII

Teil VIII

Teil IX

Teil X

Teil XI

Teil XII

Teil XIII

Teil XIV

Teil XV

Teil XVI

Teil XVII

Teil XVIII


~~

ooookay*g*
ich hab mir mal überlegt, dass es garkeine Kinderstories von L und L gibt *kopfkratz* und da hab ich einfach was angefangen, als mein Internet wieder mal tot war Unsure

here we go:

Teil 1:

„Lucas!“ Die Stimme seines Vaters schallte durch das Haus und der kleine Junge schreckte von seinem Flugzeugmodell auf.
„Ja Dad?“ rief er zurück
„Kommst du bitte herunter?“
„Sofort“ sorgfältig legte er die Einzelteile die noch übrig waren in die Schachtel zurück, stellte das fast fertige Flugzeug in den Schrank und lief hinunter in den Laden.
„Darf ich dir helfen?“ fragte er aufgeregt
„Nein, aber könntest du bitte Mrs. Fenannigan helfen, ihre Einkaufstüten nachhause zu tragen?“
Zuerst sah der Kleine enttäuscht aus, doch dann hellte sich seine Miene auf; Mrs. Fennanigan hatte viele Katzen in ihrem Haus, mit denen er immer spielen durfte.
„Komm aber bald wieder, hörst du?“
„Jaja“ rief Luke über seine Schulter und hopste fröhlich neben der alten Dame her, eine Einkaufstüte in jeder Hand.

„Moooom ich will da nicht hin“ weinte Lorelai.
„Lorelai sei doch nicht so kindisch, du musst in den Kindergarten gehen“ „Aber ich mag da nicht bleiben, die Tante ist immer so gemein zu mir!“ „Dann werde ich mit ihr sprechen. Geh jetzt und zieh dein Kleid an, wir sind schon sehr spät dran“
Lorelai ging mit hängendem Kopf in ihr Zimmer, nahm das schöne Kleid vom Stuhl und zog es an.
Sie flocht sich die Haare zu zwei Zöpfen und drehte sich vor dem Spiegel. Als sie nichts zu bemängeln fand, ging sie wieder hinunter und nahm tapfer ihr Kindergartenköfferchen.
Sie stand schon an der Türe, als Emily aus dem Esszimmer kam und trottete brav neben ihrer Mutter her zum Auto.


hate it? like it? More? Smile
Ich bitte untertänigst um Feedback*g*

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Geschrieben von: Jessy01
10.11.2004, 02:36
Forum: Bücher & Comics
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Wollte nur mal wissen welchen Harry Potter ihr am besten findet!
Ich persönich fand den dritten am besten!


LG Jessy

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Geschrieben von: Marty
09.11.2004, 20:36
Forum: Abgebrochene FanFictions
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Eigentlich wollte ich diese FF hier mal rein kopieren, aber ich weiß jetzt natürlich nicht ob es die hier schon gibt. Ich glaub ja nicht, oder? Naja, pineapple, hat ja gesagt das ist ihre Lieblings FF und naja....- meine jetzt auch, dank ihr Wink Okay, ich poste hier mal einfachu und wenn das schon jemand vor mir gemacht hat kann man ja den Thread schließen.

[LAUREN GRAHAM VOICE OVER]

Previously, on Gilmore Girls.... [Cue 'La La' Music]

~~~~~

LORELAI: Oh, your nephew's coming to visit.

LUKE: No, he's coming to stay.

~~~~~

LORELAI: He doesn’t seem like the nicest kid.

RORY: Well, you don’t know him.

~~~~~

JESS: Why’d you call?

RORY: I . . um, I wanted to. . .

JESS: I’m glad you called.

RORY: Yeah?

JESS: Yeah.

~~~~~

JESS: Okay, so I just go straight and we’ll be back at Luke’s.

RORY: Good sense of direction.

JESS: Of course, I could turn right and then we’d just be driving around in circles for awhile.

RORY: Turn right.

JESS: As you wish.

~~~~~

RORY: I need you to be calm.

LORELAI: Calm about what?

RORY: Calm about what I have to tell you.

LORELAI: What – where are you?

RORY: I’m all right.

LORELAI: Well, of course you’re all right – why wouldn’t you be all right?

RORY: Because. . .I got in an accident.

~~~~~

LORELAI: Why did you bring him here?

LUKE: What?

LORELAI: If you hadn’t brought him here, none of this would’ve happened.

~~~~~

LORELAI: Go to hell!

LUKE: Right back at ya!

~~~~~

JESS: I made sure she was okay.

LUKE: I know you did.

~~~~~

MISS PATTY: I can’t believe Luke would send him off like that.

BABETTE: Well, I heard the kid wanted to go. I don’t know. All I know is that Jess is gone.

~~~~~

RORY: What?

JESS: I said, why did you come here?

RORY: Well -

JESS: I mean, you ditched school and everything. That's so not you. Why'd you do it?

RORY: Because you didn't say goodbye.

JESS: Oh. Bye, Rory.

RORY: Bye, Jess.

~~~~~

LORELAI: I guess we’ll never know until we try.

CHRISTOPHER: So, we try?

LORELAI: Yeah, we try.

~~~~~

CHRISTOPHER: And what do you think about all this?

RORY: I don’t know. What exactly are your intentions?

CHRISTOPHER: Excuse me?

RORY: Your intentions – are they honorable?

CHRISTOPHER: Completely honorable.

RORY: Yeah? Because we have been waiting for this for a really long time and we take disappointment extremely hard. I mean it, property damage is often involved.

CHRISTOPHER: Well, I better follow through on this, huh?

RORY: I think that’s an excellent idea.

~~~~~

CHRISTOPHER: Sherry’s pregnant.

LORELAI: Oh. Oh my.

~~~~~

CHRISTOPHER: I missed it before with Rory. I wasn’t there, I wasn’t apart of it.

LORELAI: I know.

CHRISTOPHER: And I never forgave myself.

LORELAI: I know.

CHRISTOPHER: So, what, I’m just. . .I’m gonna do that again? I’m just gonna take off, disappear?

LORELAI: No. You’re gonna go home.

~~~~~

JESS: I moved back.

RORY: But – what – why?

JESS: Just wanted to.

[Rory kisses him]


[End 'La La' Music]

Das ist passiert Wink Und nun der erste Teil:

[CUT TO – Independence Inn - Afternoon]


(SOOKIE and JACKSON’S wedding reception is in full swing, everyone’s having a great time. Everyone except Lorelai and Rory.)

EMILY: (excited, finishing a mouthful of food.) Oh my god! This cake is amazing. It’s simply wonderful. Lorelai, have you tried this cake?

LORELAI: (distant) No, mom. I haven’t tried the cake.

EMILY: You must! Lorelai, I insist.

LORELAI: Ok, mom.

EMILY: (frustrated) Lorelai? Are you even listening to me?

RICHARD: Maybe she doesn’t want to try the cake Emily.

EMILY: Well I think she should. It’s amazing.

RICHARD: So we’ve heard.

EMILY: Have you tried the cake?

RICHARD: No, Emily. I have not.

EMILY: Well, you must!

(EMILY shoves a forkful of cake in RICHARD’S mouth. After a moment he raises an eyebrow.)

RICHARD: My, that is good!

EMILY: I said it was.

RICHARD: So you did.

(LORELAI sits and watches her friends and neighbors dancing and talking happily. She folds her arms across her chest and tries to hold back her tears.)

(RORY and DEAN are standing a few feet away from the makeshift dance floor. RORY has her arms wrapped around herself and DEAN doesn’t seem to notice that she’s distracted.)

DEAN: (hopefully) Do you wanna’ dance?

RORY: (hesitantly) I uh… new shoes.

(RORY points to her feet.)

RORY: Not ready for tearing up the dance floor just yet.

DEAN: Ok. Uh… do you want something to drink?

RORY: No. Thanks. I’m fine.

DEAN: You don’t seem fine.

RORY: I am though.

DEAN: (unconvinced) Ok. You’re fine.

RORY: Totally fine.

DEAN: Completely fine.

RORY: (smiling slightly) Could not be more fine.

DEAN: Good.

(RORY stares off across the lawn to where she and JESS kissed only a few hours before. DEAN frowns, realizes that she’s not fine at all.)

DEAN: I hear Sookie made shortbread.

RORY: (confused, she is pulled from her daydream) Huh?

DEAN: You like shortbread?

RORY: Yes.

DEAN: I can get you some.

(RORY tries to hide her frustration at his pestering and smiles a little.)

RORY: That would be nice.

DEAN: (happily) I’ll be right back.

RORY: Good.

(DEAN hurries off to get RORY some shortbread. RORY visibly deflates, as if she’s been holding her breath.)


[CUT TO – Gilmore House - Night]


(LORELAI kicks the front door open. And walks inside.)

RORY: (indifferently) You could have gotten your heel stuck in the wood.

LORELAI: (groaning) Don’t care.

RORY: We would have been short one front door.

LORELAI: Don’t care.

RORY: (raising an eyebrow) People would have been able to see you in your Hello Kitty pajamas.

LORELAI: Don’t care.

(Rory and Lorelai collapse in a heap on the couch. LORELAI rests her head on RORY’s shoulder.)

RORY: Great wedding.

LORELAI: The best.

RORY: Great food.

LORELAI: Like you ever doubted it.

RORY: Where’s dad?

(LORELAI closes her eyes and sighs.)

LORELAI: (sadly) He had to leave.

RORY: (confused) Leave? Why? He’s coming back, right?

(RORY sits up straight, forcing LORELAI to do the same. LORELAI looks at RORY apologetically.)

LORELAI: I’m sorry, babe. I wanted him to stay too, but…

RORY: (getting upset) Then why didn’t he? He promised! He said we’d be a family.

(RORY gets up and stands in front of LORELAI, her eyes tearing up. LORELAI’s do the same.)

LORELAI: (softly) He’s got to be someone else’s dad right now. Sherry’s pregnant.

RORY: But… what about us? What about me? I’m his kid too. He’s my dad too!

LORELAI: He is.

RORY: He promised!

(RORY starts to cry quietly and LORELAI gets up, wrapping her arms around her.

LORELAI: I know, sweetie. But he couldn’t walk away from Sherry. He couldn’t miss watching his second baby grow up the way he missed it with you.

(RORY opens her mouth to say something but no sound comes out. She hugs LORELAI tightly. LORELAI closes her eyes and hugs RORY back, wishing she could change things and make it right.)


[CUT TO – Main Street - Morning]


(RORY and LANE are walking and talking.)

LANE: (engrossed in her story) …So I told him, it’s not that you’re a bad singer. It’s that you’re a really bad singer. You are such a bad singer that I want to rip my ears off, roll them up and shove them in the bloody holes that remain, just so I can’t hear you!

RORY: (amused) And that was you letting him down gently?

LANE: Yes. Trust me.

RORY: (giggling) Wow. He must have been bad.

LANE: (seriously) He was. He was bad. Very bad. Unbelievably bad.

RORY: My mom bad?

LANE: Worse.

RORY: Wow… she’s going to be so disappointed when I tell her she’s not the worst singer in the world.

LANE: She’s the worst female singer in the world.

RORY: (thoughtfully) That might help.

(RORY stops, wondering where they’re going.)

RORY: I just realized I have no idea where you’re taking me.

LANE: I’m not taking you. You’re accompanying me.

RORY: Ok, where to?

LANE: Luke’s. My mom is busy yelling at someone about the church decorations. So I figure I have about 30 minutes to have a coffee and a donut, get home brush my teeth, pray, and hope she never realizes that sugar and caffeine entered my body.

RORY: (shaking her head defiantly) I can’t go to Luke’s.

LANE: Funny.

RORY: Serious.

LANE: Not funny.

RORY: Sorry.

LANE: Why? I thought you were ok with your mom and Luke being on not so great terms right now…

RORY: I am.

LANE: (confused) And so….

RORY: I can’t go to Luke’s…

LANE: …Because…

(RORY shifts uncomfortably from one foot to the next. Glancing at the diner and then down at the sidewalk.)

RORY: You know what? We’ll go to Doose’s and get you a whole box of donuts and then we’ll go to my house and get you a whole pot of coffee.

LANE: Doose’s donuts aren’t half as good as Luke’s.

RORY: I’m sure any third world country would be grateful for them anyway.

LANE: But I’m not in a third world country. I’m in Stars Hollow. I’ve been spoiled. I want nice donuts.

RORY: No, you don’t.

LANE: Rory, do you know what I had for breakfast?

RORY: (cringing) Does it start with Tofu?

LANE: Nope, but there was mucho soy involved!

RORY: I’m sorry.

LANE: Me too. (pouting) I want a donut.

RORY: I want world peace. It’s not happening today though, and neither is you getting a donut from Luke’s.

LANE: (giving in) You’ve totally flipped.

RORY: Years ago. Let’s go to Doose’s.

LANE: (reluctantly) Fine.

(RORY links her arm with LANE’s and they head for Doose’s Market.)


[CUT TO – Doose’s Market - Morning]


LANE: You owe me.

RORY: I know.

LANE: If I ever need a liver I’m taking yours. I don’t care if it’s not a match.

RORY: (smiling slightly) Noted.

(RORY and LANE browse to aisles in search of Donuts. DEAN comes up behind them.)

DEAN: Hey!

RORY: (surprised) Dean.

LANE: Hey.

RORY: (making unnecessary excuses) Lane needed a donut. I just came with her. She had soy for breakfast.

DEAN: (amused) Ok…

RORY: I owe her my liver.

DEAN: I see.

RORY: (blushing) Hi.

DEAN: (chuckling) Hi.

LANE: Where are the donuts?

DEAN: You don’t want them. Trust me. They’re all past their expiration dates.

LANE: (frustrated) Why is the world against me and my donut?!

DEAN: Go to Luke’s. His are better any way.

LANE: I’m not allowed to go to Luke’s.

DEAN: (frowning) What did your mom catch you doing this time?

LANE: Nothing. Rory won’t let me.

RORY: I…

DEAN: Why won’t you let her go to Luke’s?

RORY: I never said she couldn’t go. I just… said I wasn’t going.

(DEAN looks suspicious and turns to LANE for an explanation.)

LANE: Don’t look at me. I just want a donut!

DEAN: What’s wrong with Luke’s?

RORY: Nothing is wrong with Luke’s.

DEAN: Then why won’t you go there?

RORY: I felt like a change.

DEAN: (raising an eyebrow at her) You’re afraid of change.

RORY: (sarcastically) I’m training for Fear Factor.

(DEAN and LANE both look thoroughly confused.)

RORY: (feeling accused) Can’t a person… Why is it so hard to believe that… I’m going home.

(RORY turns and walks towards the exit. LANE shrugs at DEAN and hurries after her.)


[CUT TO – Main Street – Morning]


(LANE catches up to RORY and falls into step beside her. RORY is walking quickly.)

LANE: Hey… slow down Sergeant Major! The troops are working on an empty stomach here.

RORY: You can go to Luke’s now.

LANE: (breathless) I’d much rather find out why my best friend has crossed over to the dark side.

RORY: (upset) I don’t want to talk about it.

LANE: What ‘it’?

RORY: Not ‘it’. No ‘it’.

LANE: I sense an ‘it’.

RORY: You’re working on an empty stomach, like you said. Your senses are whacked.

LANE: My senses are fine.

(LANE grabs RORY firmly but gently by the arm and spins her around so they’re facing each other.)

LANE: (determinedly) Spill ‘it’.

RORY: (nervously) Not here.

(RORY and LANE continue in the direction of the Gilmore’s house.)


[CUT TO – Gilmore House – Morning]


(LANE and RORY enter.)

RORY: (calling) Mom? Mom, are you home?

LANE: I thought she’d be working.

RORY: (sighs) Just checking.

LANE: So… can you tell me now?

(RORY pulls LANE into her room and shuts the door.)

RORY: You can’t tell anyone.

LANE: I swear.

RORY: And you can’t do that bouncy ‘oh my god’ thing you do.

LANE: (defensively) I’m a cheerleader.

RORY: You’re my best friend.

LANE: Ok.

RORY: Jess is back.

LANE: Wow. He’s insane.

RORY: What?

LANE: He broke you. The whole town wants to break him.

RORY: (remembering) Oh.

LANE: (confused) Why would he come back? He hates us. We hate him…

RORY: I don’t hate him.

LANE: You see the good in everyone. Even when there ain’t much good to be seen.

RORY: Lane…

LANE: Sorry. He’s your friend. I respect that…

RORY: I kissed him.

LANE: (shocked) Oh…

RORY: Don’t say it.

LANE: Oh… my… word?

(RORY rolls her eyes and sits on her bed next to LANE.)

LANE: When did you kiss him? Why did you kiss him? What about Dean? Do you like Jess?

RORY: Too many questions.

LANE: Sorry.

RORY: I kissed him at Sookie and Jackson’s wedding. I kissed him… (sighs) because he… I don’t know why I kissed him.

LANE: You don’t know why?

RORY: No… I mean… (looking down at her hands) No.

LANE: Not even a little bit of an idea why?

RORY: (frustrated at herself) I don’t know. Maybe… there’s a teeny, tiny possibility that I may… somehow, in some alternate universe ‘the world is distorted beyond recognition’ way… have feelings for him.

LANE: Feelings of…

RORY: (shrugging) Like…

LANE: Like like?

(RORY nods.)

LANE: What about Dean? Do you still love him?

RORY: Yes. I… think so.

LANE: Do you love Jess?

RORY: No! Nuh uh! No!

LANE: But… you kissed him…

RORY: Yeah…

LANE: In a public place. With your boyfriend, that you think you love, in the near vicinity.

RORY: Yeah… Maybe…

(RORY looks thoughtful and then flops back on her bed. LANE copies her.)


[CUT TO – Luke’s Diner – Afternoon]


(LUKE is taking KIRK’s order and JESS is making a fresh post of coffee.)

LUKE: (agitated) Shut up.

KIRK: Are you talking to me?

LUKE: You’ll know when I’m talking to you, Kirk.

KIRK: You were looking at me.

LUKE: I wasn’t.

KIRK: You were looking at my menu.

LUKE: Your menu isn’t you.

KIRK: (wounded) It still hurt.

LUKE: Shut up.

KIRK: You were talking to me that time.

LUKE: (sarcastic) Perceptive.

(LUKE turns around and heads for the kitchen.)

JESS: Your customer service skills are outstanding.

LUKE: This coming from the guy who told Andrew to stick his hotdog where the sun doesn’t shine just because he asked for mustard?

JESS: I didn’t say that.

LUKE: I toned it down.

JESS: It doesn’t sound as good without the profanity.

LUKE: You get the idea.

JESS: My point still stands.

LUKE: Your point is?

JESS: I can be rude to any of the freaks that come into this dump. You, on the other hand, run this little slice of hell. Therefore you need to take your customers more seriously if you wish for them to continue to frequent this not so fine establishment.

KIRK: He’s right.

JESS and LUKE: Shut up, Kirk.

LUKE: You want a black eye?

JESS: Nope.

LUKE: You want a paycheck?

JESS: It sure would make my life complete.

LUKE: Then do some work!

(LUKE walks away and JESS smiles to himself, turning back to making coffee. DEAN enters the Diner and approaches the counter.)

DEAN: Can I get a…

(DEAN stops when JESS turns around.)

JESS: Would you like a children’s dictionary with that? It might help you understand the big words on the specials board.

DEAN: (coldly) Jess.

JESS: (mockingly) Bag boy.

DEAN: You’re back.

JESS: (proudly) Yes I am.

(DEAN’s face takes on an expression of realization at why Rory was avoiding the diner. JESS ignores him and goes back to work.)

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Geschrieben von: Marty
09.11.2004, 20:36
Forum: Abgebrochene FanFictions
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Eigentlich wollte ich diese FF hier mal rein kopieren, aber ich weiß jetzt natürlich nicht ob es die hier schon gibt. Ich glaub ja nicht, oder? Naja, pineapple, hat ja gesagt das ist ihre Lieblings FF und naja....- meine jetzt auch, dank ihr Wink Okay, ich poste hier mal einfachu und wenn das schon jemand vor mir gemacht hat kann man ja den Thread schließen.

[LAUREN GRAHAM VOICE OVER]

Previously, on Gilmore Girls.... [Cue 'La La' Music]

~~~~~

LORELAI: Oh, your nephew's coming to visit.

LUKE: No, he's coming to stay.

~~~~~

LORELAI: He doesn’t seem like the nicest kid.

RORY: Well, you don’t know him.

~~~~~

JESS: Why’d you call?

RORY: I . . um, I wanted to. . .

JESS: I’m glad you called.

RORY: Yeah?

JESS: Yeah.

~~~~~

JESS: Okay, so I just go straight and we’ll be back at Luke’s.

RORY: Good sense of direction.

JESS: Of course, I could turn right and then we’d just be driving around in circles for awhile.

RORY: Turn right.

JESS: As you wish.

~~~~~

RORY: I need you to be calm.

LORELAI: Calm about what?

RORY: Calm about what I have to tell you.

LORELAI: What – where are you?

RORY: I’m all right.

LORELAI: Well, of course you’re all right – why wouldn’t you be all right?

RORY: Because. . .I got in an accident.

~~~~~

LORELAI: Why did you bring him here?

LUKE: What?

LORELAI: If you hadn’t brought him here, none of this would’ve happened.

~~~~~

LORELAI: Go to hell!

LUKE: Right back at ya!

~~~~~

JESS: I made sure she was okay.

LUKE: I know you did.

~~~~~

MISS PATTY: I can’t believe Luke would send him off like that.

BABETTE: Well, I heard the kid wanted to go. I don’t know. All I know is that Jess is gone.

~~~~~

RORY: What?

JESS: I said, why did you come here?

RORY: Well -

JESS: I mean, you ditched school and everything. That's so not you. Why'd you do it?

RORY: Because you didn't say goodbye.

JESS: Oh. Bye, Rory.

RORY: Bye, Jess.

~~~~~

LORELAI: I guess we’ll never know until we try.

CHRISTOPHER: So, we try?

LORELAI: Yeah, we try.

~~~~~

CHRISTOPHER: And what do you think about all this?

RORY: I don’t know. What exactly are your intentions?

CHRISTOPHER: Excuse me?

RORY: Your intentions – are they honorable?

CHRISTOPHER: Completely honorable.

RORY: Yeah? Because we have been waiting for this for a really long time and we take disappointment extremely hard. I mean it, property damage is often involved.

CHRISTOPHER: Well, I better follow through on this, huh?

RORY: I think that’s an excellent idea.

~~~~~

CHRISTOPHER: Sherry’s pregnant.

LORELAI: Oh. Oh my.

~~~~~

CHRISTOPHER: I missed it before with Rory. I wasn’t there, I wasn’t apart of it.

LORELAI: I know.

CHRISTOPHER: And I never forgave myself.

LORELAI: I know.

CHRISTOPHER: So, what, I’m just. . .I’m gonna do that again? I’m just gonna take off, disappear?

LORELAI: No. You’re gonna go home.

~~~~~

JESS: I moved back.

RORY: But – what – why?

JESS: Just wanted to.

[Rory kisses him]


[End 'La La' Music]

Das ist passiert Wink Und nun der erste Teil:

[CUT TO – Independence Inn - Afternoon]


(SOOKIE and JACKSON’S wedding reception is in full swing, everyone’s having a great time. Everyone except Lorelai and Rory.)

EMILY: (excited, finishing a mouthful of food.) Oh my god! This cake is amazing. It’s simply wonderful. Lorelai, have you tried this cake?

LORELAI: (distant) No, mom. I haven’t tried the cake.

EMILY: You must! Lorelai, I insist.

LORELAI: Ok, mom.

EMILY: (frustrated) Lorelai? Are you even listening to me?

RICHARD: Maybe she doesn’t want to try the cake Emily.

EMILY: Well I think she should. It’s amazing.

RICHARD: So we’ve heard.

EMILY: Have you tried the cake?

RICHARD: No, Emily. I have not.

EMILY: Well, you must!

(EMILY shoves a forkful of cake in RICHARD’S mouth. After a moment he raises an eyebrow.)

RICHARD: My, that is good!

EMILY: I said it was.

RICHARD: So you did.

(LORELAI sits and watches her friends and neighbors dancing and talking happily. She folds her arms across her chest and tries to hold back her tears.)

(RORY and DEAN are standing a few feet away from the makeshift dance floor. RORY has her arms wrapped around herself and DEAN doesn’t seem to notice that she’s distracted.)

DEAN: (hopefully) Do you wanna’ dance?

RORY: (hesitantly) I uh… new shoes.

(RORY points to her feet.)

RORY: Not ready for tearing up the dance floor just yet.

DEAN: Ok. Uh… do you want something to drink?

RORY: No. Thanks. I’m fine.

DEAN: You don’t seem fine.

RORY: I am though.

DEAN: (unconvinced) Ok. You’re fine.

RORY: Totally fine.

DEAN: Completely fine.

RORY: (smiling slightly) Could not be more fine.

DEAN: Good.

(RORY stares off across the lawn to where she and JESS kissed only a few hours before. DEAN frowns, realizes that she’s not fine at all.)

DEAN: I hear Sookie made shortbread.

RORY: (confused, she is pulled from her daydream) Huh?

DEAN: You like shortbread?

RORY: Yes.

DEAN: I can get you some.

(RORY tries to hide her frustration at his pestering and smiles a little.)

RORY: That would be nice.

DEAN: (happily) I’ll be right back.

RORY: Good.

(DEAN hurries off to get RORY some shortbread. RORY visibly deflates, as if she’s been holding her breath.)


[CUT TO – Gilmore House - Night]


(LORELAI kicks the front door open. And walks inside.)

RORY: (indifferently) You could have gotten your heel stuck in the wood.

LORELAI: (groaning) Don’t care.

RORY: We would have been short one front door.

LORELAI: Don’t care.

RORY: (raising an eyebrow) People would have been able to see you in your Hello Kitty pajamas.

LORELAI: Don’t care.

(Rory and Lorelai collapse in a heap on the couch. LORELAI rests her head on RORY’s shoulder.)

RORY: Great wedding.

LORELAI: The best.

RORY: Great food.

LORELAI: Like you ever doubted it.

RORY: Where’s dad?

(LORELAI closes her eyes and sighs.)

LORELAI: (sadly) He had to leave.

RORY: (confused) Leave? Why? He’s coming back, right?

(RORY sits up straight, forcing LORELAI to do the same. LORELAI looks at RORY apologetically.)

LORELAI: I’m sorry, babe. I wanted him to stay too, but…

RORY: (getting upset) Then why didn’t he? He promised! He said we’d be a family.

(RORY gets up and stands in front of LORELAI, her eyes tearing up. LORELAI’s do the same.)

LORELAI: (softly) He’s got to be someone else’s dad right now. Sherry’s pregnant.

RORY: But… what about us? What about me? I’m his kid too. He’s my dad too!

LORELAI: He is.

RORY: He promised!

(RORY starts to cry quietly and LORELAI gets up, wrapping her arms around her.

LORELAI: I know, sweetie. But he couldn’t walk away from Sherry. He couldn’t miss watching his second baby grow up the way he missed it with you.

(RORY opens her mouth to say something but no sound comes out. She hugs LORELAI tightly. LORELAI closes her eyes and hugs RORY back, wishing she could change things and make it right.)


[CUT TO – Main Street - Morning]


(RORY and LANE are walking and talking.)

LANE: (engrossed in her story) …So I told him, it’s not that you’re a bad singer. It’s that you’re a really bad singer. You are such a bad singer that I want to rip my ears off, roll them up and shove them in the bloody holes that remain, just so I can’t hear you!

RORY: (amused) And that was you letting him down gently?

LANE: Yes. Trust me.

RORY: (giggling) Wow. He must have been bad.

LANE: (seriously) He was. He was bad. Very bad. Unbelievably bad.

RORY: My mom bad?

LANE: Worse.

RORY: Wow… she’s going to be so disappointed when I tell her she’s not the worst singer in the world.

LANE: She’s the worst female singer in the world.

RORY: (thoughtfully) That might help.

(RORY stops, wondering where they’re going.)

RORY: I just realized I have no idea where you’re taking me.

LANE: I’m not taking you. You’re accompanying me.

RORY: Ok, where to?

LANE: Luke’s. My mom is busy yelling at someone about the church decorations. So I figure I have about 30 minutes to have a coffee and a donut, get home brush my teeth, pray, and hope she never realizes that sugar and caffeine entered my body.

RORY: (shaking her head defiantly) I can’t go to Luke’s.

LANE: Funny.

RORY: Serious.

LANE: Not funny.

RORY: Sorry.

LANE: Why? I thought you were ok with your mom and Luke being on not so great terms right now…

RORY: I am.

LANE: (confused) And so….

RORY: I can’t go to Luke’s…

LANE: …Because…

(RORY shifts uncomfortably from one foot to the next. Glancing at the diner and then down at the sidewalk.)

RORY: You know what? We’ll go to Doose’s and get you a whole box of donuts and then we’ll go to my house and get you a whole pot of coffee.

LANE: Doose’s donuts aren’t half as good as Luke’s.

RORY: I’m sure any third world country would be grateful for them anyway.

LANE: But I’m not in a third world country. I’m in Stars Hollow. I’ve been spoiled. I want nice donuts.

RORY: No, you don’t.

LANE: Rory, do you know what I had for breakfast?

RORY: (cringing) Does it start with Tofu?

LANE: Nope, but there was mucho soy involved!

RORY: I’m sorry.

LANE: Me too. (pouting) I want a donut.

RORY: I want world peace. It’s not happening today though, and neither is you getting a donut from Luke’s.

LANE: (giving in) You’ve totally flipped.

RORY: Years ago. Let’s go to Doose’s.

LANE: (reluctantly) Fine.

(RORY links her arm with LANE’s and they head for Doose’s Market.)


[CUT TO – Doose’s Market - Morning]


LANE: You owe me.

RORY: I know.

LANE: If I ever need a liver I’m taking yours. I don’t care if it’s not a match.

RORY: (smiling slightly) Noted.

(RORY and LANE browse to aisles in search of Donuts. DEAN comes up behind them.)

DEAN: Hey!

RORY: (surprised) Dean.

LANE: Hey.

RORY: (making unnecessary excuses) Lane needed a donut. I just came with her. She had soy for breakfast.

DEAN: (amused) Ok…

RORY: I owe her my liver.

DEAN: I see.

RORY: (blushing) Hi.

DEAN: (chuckling) Hi.

LANE: Where are the donuts?

DEAN: You don’t want them. Trust me. They’re all past their expiration dates.

LANE: (frustrated) Why is the world against me and my donut?!

DEAN: Go to Luke’s. His are better any way.

LANE: I’m not allowed to go to Luke’s.

DEAN: (frowning) What did your mom catch you doing this time?

LANE: Nothing. Rory won’t let me.

RORY: I…

DEAN: Why won’t you let her go to Luke’s?

RORY: I never said she couldn’t go. I just… said I wasn’t going.

(DEAN looks suspicious and turns to LANE for an explanation.)

LANE: Don’t look at me. I just want a donut!

DEAN: What’s wrong with Luke’s?

RORY: Nothing is wrong with Luke’s.

DEAN: Then why won’t you go there?

RORY: I felt like a change.

DEAN: (raising an eyebrow at her) You’re afraid of change.

RORY: (sarcastically) I’m training for Fear Factor.

(DEAN and LANE both look thoroughly confused.)

RORY: (feeling accused) Can’t a person… Why is it so hard to believe that… I’m going home.

(RORY turns and walks towards the exit. LANE shrugs at DEAN and hurries after her.)


[CUT TO – Main Street – Morning]


(LANE catches up to RORY and falls into step beside her. RORY is walking quickly.)

LANE: Hey… slow down Sergeant Major! The troops are working on an empty stomach here.

RORY: You can go to Luke’s now.

LANE: (breathless) I’d much rather find out why my best friend has crossed over to the dark side.

RORY: (upset) I don’t want to talk about it.

LANE: What ‘it’?

RORY: Not ‘it’. No ‘it’.

LANE: I sense an ‘it’.

RORY: You’re working on an empty stomach, like you said. Your senses are whacked.

LANE: My senses are fine.

(LANE grabs RORY firmly but gently by the arm and spins her around so they’re facing each other.)

LANE: (determinedly) Spill ‘it’.

RORY: (nervously) Not here.

(RORY and LANE continue in the direction of the Gilmore’s house.)


[CUT TO – Gilmore House – Morning]


(LANE and RORY enter.)

RORY: (calling) Mom? Mom, are you home?

LANE: I thought she’d be working.

RORY: (sighs) Just checking.

LANE: So… can you tell me now?

(RORY pulls LANE into her room and shuts the door.)

RORY: You can’t tell anyone.

LANE: I swear.

RORY: And you can’t do that bouncy ‘oh my god’ thing you do.

LANE: (defensively) I’m a cheerleader.

RORY: You’re my best friend.

LANE: Ok.

RORY: Jess is back.

LANE: Wow. He’s insane.

RORY: What?

LANE: He broke you. The whole town wants to break him.

RORY: (remembering) Oh.

LANE: (confused) Why would he come back? He hates us. We hate him…

RORY: I don’t hate him.

LANE: You see the good in everyone. Even when there ain’t much good to be seen.

RORY: Lane…

LANE: Sorry. He’s your friend. I respect that…

RORY: I kissed him.

LANE: (shocked) Oh…

RORY: Don’t say it.

LANE: Oh… my… word?

(RORY rolls her eyes and sits on her bed next to LANE.)

LANE: When did you kiss him? Why did you kiss him? What about Dean? Do you like Jess?

RORY: Too many questions.

LANE: Sorry.

RORY: I kissed him at Sookie and Jackson’s wedding. I kissed him… (sighs) because he… I don’t know why I kissed him.

LANE: You don’t know why?

RORY: No… I mean… (looking down at her hands) No.

LANE: Not even a little bit of an idea why?

RORY: (frustrated at herself) I don’t know. Maybe… there’s a teeny, tiny possibility that I may… somehow, in some alternate universe ‘the world is distorted beyond recognition’ way… have feelings for him.

LANE: Feelings of…

RORY: (shrugging) Like…

LANE: Like like?

(RORY nods.)

LANE: What about Dean? Do you still love him?

RORY: Yes. I… think so.

LANE: Do you love Jess?

RORY: No! Nuh uh! No!

LANE: But… you kissed him…

RORY: Yeah…

LANE: In a public place. With your boyfriend, that you think you love, in the near vicinity.

RORY: Yeah… Maybe…

(RORY looks thoughtful and then flops back on her bed. LANE copies her.)


[CUT TO – Luke’s Diner – Afternoon]


(LUKE is taking KIRK’s order and JESS is making a fresh post of coffee.)

LUKE: (agitated) Shut up.

KIRK: Are you talking to me?

LUKE: You’ll know when I’m talking to you, Kirk.

KIRK: You were looking at me.

LUKE: I wasn’t.

KIRK: You were looking at my menu.

LUKE: Your menu isn’t you.

KIRK: (wounded) It still hurt.

LUKE: Shut up.

KIRK: You were talking to me that time.

LUKE: (sarcastic) Perceptive.

(LUKE turns around and heads for the kitchen.)

JESS: Your customer service skills are outstanding.

LUKE: This coming from the guy who told Andrew to stick his hotdog where the sun doesn’t shine just because he asked for mustard?

JESS: I didn’t say that.

LUKE: I toned it down.

JESS: It doesn’t sound as good without the profanity.

LUKE: You get the idea.

JESS: My point still stands.

LUKE: Your point is?

JESS: I can be rude to any of the freaks that come into this dump. You, on the other hand, run this little slice of hell. Therefore you need to take your customers more seriously if you wish for them to continue to frequent this not so fine establishment.

KIRK: He’s right.

JESS and LUKE: Shut up, Kirk.

LUKE: You want a black eye?

JESS: Nope.

LUKE: You want a paycheck?

JESS: It sure would make my life complete.

LUKE: Then do some work!

(LUKE walks away and JESS smiles to himself, turning back to making coffee. DEAN enters the Diner and approaches the counter.)

DEAN: Can I get a…

(DEAN stops when JESS turns around.)

JESS: Would you like a children’s dictionary with that? It might help you understand the big words on the specials board.

DEAN: (coldly) Jess.

JESS: (mockingly) Bag boy.

DEAN: You’re back.

JESS: (proudly) Yes I am.

(DEAN’s face takes on an expression of realization at why Rory was avoiding the diner. JESS ignores him and goes back to work.)

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Geschrieben von: lila lila
09.11.2004, 20:18
Forum: Feedback
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ich hab da mal ne frage zum chat!
Was bedeutet "away message"?
diese seite kommt, wenn man seinen nickname eingegeben hat!

muss man da auch extra eingeloggt sein, oder ist man durch den mitgliedereintrag ins forum gleichzeitig angemeldet???
bitte um antwort!
lila

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Geschrieben von: sassi
09.11.2004, 19:25
Forum: Bücher & Comics
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Falls es das schon gibt schließt einfach den Thread. Wollts nur mal wissen!

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