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gracias für se feedback, sieht man mein grinsen bei euch denn? schon oder? Big Grin
hier der neue Teil, ich hoff er is euren Anforderungen genehm *g*


He felt himself reacting immediately and pulled her back into the dressing room, kissing her fiercely. He pushed her against the wall as her tongue entered his mouth and he bit back a groan. She put her foot on the chair next to them and undid his belt, sliding the pants down to his feet. They were followed by his boxers immediately; luckily, she only wore a skirt that day, he inched it up to her waist and he entered her with one swift movement. Lorelai leaned her head back against the wall and chewed on her bottom lip, trying hard to keep herself from moaning. They soon found a mutual rhythm and as Lorelai felt she was coming close, she dug her fingernails into Luke’s back and whimpered slightly. She clenched her eyes shut and bit down hard on her lip to keep the quiet as orgasm washed over her. Luke felt her contracting around him and sunk his teeth into her shoulder when he jumped over the cliff.

He collapsed against her and she ran her fingers through his hair.
“Wow” she breathed
“Yeah, how many people can say they had sex in a D&G boutique, huh?” He sensed her chuckle through her chest and smiled too. “I bet it’s make a good anecdote at my parent’s dinner parties!” After a beat she said
“You look really hot in that suit”
“I figured”



“You told me you picked the dress out months ago!” Luke tapped his foot impatiently, watching his girlfriend standing in front of her huge closet, clad only in a bra and panties, browsing through the racks.
“Yeah well, that was a lie” she said nonchalantly
“I’m so glad that this relationship is based on trust and honesty!” Luke wisecracked.
“Oh be quiet over there” she said and he could hear the smile in her voice.
Lorelai tossed the thousandth dress on the pile that was already on her bed, exasperated.
Then she remembered the large box in top of her closet and pulled it down, losing balance and falling to the floor with it.
“Ouch, damnit” Luke rushed to her side, held out a hand and helped her up.
“You okay?”
“Yeah I’m fine, just too damn clumsy, you know.” She opened the box and smiled, it was still as beautiful as she remembered.
“What am I looking at?”
“That’s my prom dress, or ... was, but I never got around to wearing it, I wanted to wear something “special””
“Oh God!”
“Yeah, that was what my mother said too when she saw the pictures afterwards. Don’t ask what happened after she saw them, very traumatic!” She had put on the dress as she spoke and turned around
“Zip please! Man it’s nice to finally have someone to zip my dresses”
“How – okay I get the feeling I shouldn’t ask how you zipped your dresses before….” She shrugged
“I just left them unzipped”
“And I should learn to trust my feelings”
“Thanks honey” she gave him a quick kiss.
“So you’ll just drop by the Diner and then come as quickly as possible?” “Ya, I’ll be there, I promised, remember?”

They walked down the stairs hand in hand and turned toward each other at the door and kissed passionately.
“I gotta go”
“Right” she looked a little disappointed.
He turned to leave, not letting go of her hand just yet but she pulled him back, smiling “You have lipstick on your lips” So she gently wiped her lipstick off his lips and gave him a small peck, then shoved him slightly out the door
“Go, go, before I won’t let you anymore” She waved at him, then returned into the house to retrieve her purse.

She walked into the room and surveyed overlooked the huge ballroom. She stood on the balustrade with the bar and downstairs were tables set up for dinner, a dance floor and the band.
Walking down the stairs, Lorelai spotted a group of women and decided to join them, reluctantly, but they were the wives (hollow, superficial characters with no spine) of her customers, so she had to go over and talk to them.
“Oh Lorelai, how nice! How are you?”
“I’m fine thanks” she lied and plastered on a smile.
“How are you all?”
“Just jolly fine, dear” she cringed inwardly.
“Well, give your husbands my best, will you? Excuse me ladies.”
Glad to leave, she discovered her real friends standing nearby. She paused to look at them:
Tom, the best dressed and funniest man she knew, unfortunately ‘gay as the night is dark’ as he had made clear at their first meeting,
Sheila, the down-to-earth lawyer with a good sense of humor,
Lauren, with who she not only shared her initials but also a great deal of her life,
Christopher, she knew him from the sandbox-stage and had hit him over the head once with her shovel, something he reminded her of constantly and last but not least,
Alex, the most outspoken person she knew, she didn’t mince matters and always said what she thought, a quality that people should cherish, but instead they avoided Alex at all costs.

“Hey guys” she stepped up to them, wearing a real smile now.
“Ladies and Gentlemen, the princess has arrived” Lauren returned her smile as she kissed both of her friends’ cheeks.
“I told you a million times already, I don’t like that nickname, alright?” “Hey Lore, are you armed? Should I beware or can I greet you safely?” She held up her hands “All clear, Chris” she hugged him and patted his back
“Good to see you Chris”
“My, my, you look fabulous honey, what did you do?” Sheila leaned in and whispered audibly
“Tell me, is it Botox?” Everybody laughed at that and Sheila smirked at Lorelai and hugged her.
“Tsss, Botox, how hill-billy! Own body fat implants is tomorrow ladies” Tom chimed in and shooed Sheila away from Lorelai to get a good hug too.
“Yeah Tom, but where does she take the fat from, huh? There’s not one ounce on her, look at her all skin and bones”
“Well I’m sure she can spare some here” Alex pinched Lorelai at her back, close to the kidneys
“She’s got quite a floating tyre there, huh?” Lorelai gasped
“Alex, shut up!” But she smirked and moved to kiss her friend on both cheeks.
“So, what’s new?” She looked at her friends expectantly.
“Well, I just busted a guy for raping his sister’s girlfriend, got him a good three years in jail and I personally would’ve given him even more, sick bastard!”
“Yeah, I mean there are so many sickos running around out there, how do you know the person you’re together with isn’t some insane killer or psycho or whatever”
“Sheila, when he’s insane, he already is psycho, that’s double-insanity”
“Whatever, doesn’t that make you sad? Lorelai?”
“Huh?”
“Look who’s not listening here.” Chris winked at her and smiled; she thought he had a thing for her but her friends kept telling her it was nothing.
“Yeah my mind was somewhere else, sorry”
“Apology accepted. Anyway, I just bought this really fabulous house and I’m having a sort of “christening” for it, you know, celebration of it being finished and stuff so I wanna invite you all personally. I mean, this is big, this is huge, my house finally being finished, ready to be moved into and not being the money pit it’s been over the last few years....”
Lauren’s voice became lower and lower to Lorelai from the word christening on; she had just felt him enter the room and everything else became unimportant.
hui schon wieder neuer part, womit ham wir das denn heute verdient? Big Grin
*erstmallesentu*
wooooooohhhhhoooooooo Strike!
Your my god Big Grin
so jetz kann ich richtig gut schalfen, auch wenn du's mal wieder spannend machst, aber der erste part war gradios Big Grin

more dirrty things Smile
CMM schrieb:wooooooohhhhhoooooooo Strike!
Your my god Big Grin
so jetz kann ich richtig gut schalfen, auch wenn du's mal wieder spannend machst, aber der erste part war gradios Big Grin

more dirrty things Smile

seh ich genau so Big Grin


ich weiß eh schon nich mehr was ich dazu sagen soll...
is mal wieder nen klasse neuer part Smile
*freu* :dance:
Das habe ich heute abend noch gebraucht. Jetzt kann ich beruhigt heia machen gehen. ODer kommt noch ein Teil? ^^
Ich weiß auch schon gar nicht mehr, was ich zu dieser FF noch sagen soll. Einfach nur superkalifragelistigexpialigetisch Big Grin
ja es kommt heute noch was Smile was liebes*g* oder was trauriges.... mal sehen *gg*
CrazyCake schrieb:
CMM schrieb:wooooooohhhhhoooooooo Strike!
Your my god Big Grin
so jetz kann ich richtig gut schalfen, auch wenn du's mal wieder spannend machst, aber der erste part war gradios Big Grin

more dirrty things Smile

seh ich genau so Big Grin


ich weiß eh schon nich mehr was ich dazu sagen soll...
is mal wieder nen klasse neuer part Smile

*lol* Dem schließ ich mich an Big Grin ... Hab sonst noch gar nix von deiner Fic gelesen, aber dieser Teil wurde mir von CMM sehr stark ans Herz gelegt *lol* Big Grin
Zitat:was liebes*g* oder was trauriges.... mal sehen *gg*

Mach doch eine mischung Smile Freuen tun wir uns glaube ich alle auf jeden Fasll über einen neuen Teil, oder?
LaurenFan schrieb:
CrazyCake schrieb:
CMM schrieb:wooooooohhhhhoooooooo Strike!
Your my god Big Grin
so jetz kann ich richtig gut schalfen, auch wenn du's mal wieder spannend machst, aber der erste part war gradios Big Grin

more dirrty things Smile

seh ich genau so Big Grin


ich weiß eh schon nich mehr was ich dazu sagen soll...
is mal wieder nen klasse neuer part Smile

*lol* Dem schließ ich mich an Big Grin ... Hab sonst noch gar nix von deiner Fic gelesen, aber dieser Teil wurde mir von CMM sehr stark ans Herz gelegt *lol* Big Grin

Tja, wir 2 stehen eben auf Dirrty!! things Big Grin

@MissLilli
ICh werde es morgen verschlingen, egal was da kommt Smile
*lol* Also ich hab mir jetzt alles rauskopiert und werd mir das gleich ausdrucken, hab morgen eine ganz spannende Vorlesung vor mir, in der ich was zum Lesen dabei haben muss Wink