04.11.2004, 22:14
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04.11.2004, 22:16
Ach so. Ich dachte schon. Das passt irgendwie ar net zu ihr...
04.11.2004, 22:24
Okay liebe Freunde: Ich schau grad fern, wenn der Film zuende ist, schreib ich vielleicht noch was
und das bild is aus: Seeing other people
und das bild is aus: Seeing other people
05.11.2004, 14:22
Karo schrieb:[Bild: 074.gif][Bild: 074.gif][Bild: 074.gif]
*lol* die find ich toll :lach:
Aaaaalso Feedback: Ich hab grad die beste Medizin gegen einen fürchterlichen Kater gefunden: Lilli's FF . Da quäl ich mich extra aus meinem warmen, gemütlichen Bett (so mancher Studi hat ja freitags frei ) und will eigentlich nur mal kurz meine Mails checken und da verschlägt es mich doch noch mal kurz hier ins Forum... Und da finde ich den neuen Teil und meine Kopfschmerzen sind wie weggeblasen und mein magen hat mich auch wieder lieb...
Ich mag deinen Schreibstil einfach soooo sehr, du hast die wunderbare Begabung, dich auf Englisch so schön ausdrücken... Ich habe schon einen ganzen Haufen FFs gelesen und nicht selten kommt es vor, dass die Dialoge gar nicht so wirklich zu den Charakteren passen, bei dir ist das anders, ich kann mir wirklich vorstellen, dass Luke und Lore sich so verhalten würden... Und ich find's immer wieder toll, wie du die anderen Charaktere aus Stars Hollow mit einbaust, aber bist du dir sicher, dass Rory als Sängerin so der Hit ist? *lol* Oder hast du etwa das Karaoke singen in 3.06 vergessen? Hoffen wir mal, dass deine Rory das besser kann :lach:
05.11.2004, 17:33
LaurenFan schrieb:Ich hab grad die beste Medizin gegen einen fürchterlichen Kater gefunden: Lilli's FF
wow, das nenn ich mal ein Kompliment *tränen in den Augen hab* danke Lauren, das is einfach so ...... hach, mir fehlen die worte *schneuz*
danke danke *bussi*
so, hier kommt der nächste Teil, aber:
Es wird extremst DIRTY also beware, ich hoffe es is nicht allzu schlecht gelungen
âLet me walk, for Christâs sake, Iâm not a fucking invalid!!â Lorelai whined as the nurse wheeled her out of the hospital
âLorelai, just can it and wait till weâre home, then you can walk, okay?â She shot Luke a warning glance that sheâs rip his head off soon if he didnât stop talking so he shut up.
They arrived at his truck and he picked her up and put her in while she wore a deep frown on her face.
âStop frowning or youâll be all wrinkly when youâre oldâ She straightened out her face immediately, causing him to smile. He got in on the driverâs side and started up the truck. Lorelai scooted over and snuggled into his shoulder
âI love this truckâ He put an arm around her shoulders and held the steering wheel with the other one âBetter than this limo of yours?â
âYesâ she said sincerely and looked up at him as he turned her head towards her, surprised
âReally??â
âI know I have a lot ofâ¦. expensive stuff Luke, but this part of my life made me realize that money isnât everything. Iâve learnt to appreciate the simple things in life and that I donât need money to be happy. Iâm happy being here with you and thatâs all I need. Put your eyes back on the road, weâre going away from the hospital, remember?â she said sternly but smiled as his head jerked back to the road right away.
âCould you shift to third gear please? When I say now?â he asked, his shifting arm was still around Lorelai
âSureâ she grasped the stick and when he pushed the coupler, she shifted into third gear, then leaned back against him again and giggled âWeâre like an old coupleâ He laughed
âJust because I asked you to shift gears?â
âMhm, yeahâ He just accepted this and pulled into a quiet road. She nuzzled his neck with her nose and ran her hand up and down his thigh. Luke swallowed hard and tried to concentrate on something else than Lorelaiâs nails scraping on his jeans.
She started kissing his neck, gently nibbling on his soft skin, eliciting a high-pitched âHoly Mother of God!â from Luke. âHow is celibacy treating you, hm?â Lorelai whispered in his ear as she reached for his belt âLorelai, Iâm drivingâ he said through clenched teeth âI knowâ she purred and sipped her hand inside his jeans âOh wow, someoneâs really happy to see meâ Luke gripped the steering wheel harder when Lorelai started stroking him through his boxers, grazed her fingernails across his erection. He sucked in a breath, his brain beginning to fog after her hand found itâs way into his boxers, her cold hand brushing his hot skin. He whimpered slightly, he wouldnât last very long, itâs been too long. Lorelai stroked his erection slowly, closing her fist around him, picking up the pace when his breathing became heavy and he started fidgeting. He moved himself against her palm, coming closer to the edge with every thrust and he squeezed his eyes shut and et out a loud moan when he couldnât take it any longer and emptied himself into his boxers. Lorelai smiled and took over the steering wheel while he tried to catch his breath; luckily, they were on a quiet road.
âSweet Jesus, that was-â he tried to find the word but failed, Lorelai gave a throaty chuckle and put her head on his shoulder while he took over the wheel and she took his one hand into hers and held onto it for the entire drive.
05.11.2004, 17:37
Meine Meinung kennst ja schon
Aber der is extrem geil...
Mir gefällt der richtig gut...
ich freu mich auf den nächsten
Aber der is extrem geil...
Mir gefällt der richtig gut...
ich freu mich auf den nächsten
05.11.2004, 17:42
gemma weite you dirrty woman aber vorher GG schaun
05.11.2004, 18:07
hui klasse part ^^
*ganzbreitgrins* ---->
*ganzbreitgrins* ---->
05.11.2004, 18:33
*dreckiggrins*
Klasse teil...DIRRTY...
:ja:
Klasse teil...DIRRTY...
:ja:
06.11.2004, 00:10
WOW! des war dirty und hot!!!
mein lieber herr gesangsverein!! abber:
freu mich mal wieder auf die forsetzung... sorry, ich weià grad gar nich, was ich schreiben soll...
mein lieber herr gesangsverein!! abber:
freu mich mal wieder auf die forsetzung... sorry, ich weià grad gar nich, was ich schreiben soll...