23.10.2004, 02:10
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23.10.2004, 02:32
bis jetzt eine seehr geile geschichte!!
und lorelai is so...
naja, so halt... :lach:
jetzt haste ja schon verraten, dass es u.a. ne LLstory wird
find ich sehr herrlich!
schnell weiter!
schreibst du an the big fight trotzdem noch weiter?
und lorelai is so...
naja, so halt... :lach:jetzt haste ja schon verraten, dass es u.a. ne LLstory wird
find ich sehr herrlich!schnell weiter!
schreibst du an the big fight trotzdem noch weiter?
23.10.2004, 02:41
ja sicher schreib ich weiter, keine Frage
aber das is viel lustiger*g* Lorelai so richtig bitchy zu schreiben is total lustig :lach:
aber das is viel lustiger*g* Lorelai so richtig bitchy zu schreiben is total lustig :lach:
23.10.2004, 02:46
kann ich mir vorstelln 
freut mich, dass du beides machst! schreibste dann big fight auf deutsch oder englisch... (sorry, wird grad wohl ein bisschen off topic
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freut mich, dass du beides machst! schreibste dann big fight auf deutsch oder englisch... (sorry, wird grad wohl ein bisschen off topic
)23.10.2004, 02:49
egal*gg*
nein ich glaub ich benutz das als Ventil für meine Englischen Ausbrüche und The big fight wird auf deutsch weitergeschrieben
nein ich glaub ich benutz das als Ventil für meine Englischen Ausbrüche und The big fight wird auf deutsch weitergeschrieben
23.10.2004, 13:42
egaal hauptsache du schreibst..denn deine beiden ffs sind hamma!!
23.10.2004, 15:18
okay von der FF hab ich urviel weitergeschrieben, im Zug (eh schon wissen ) aber ich muss es erst auf den PC hier übertragen, also das dauert einige Zeit*g* aber dann gehts weiter
) aber ich muss es erst auf den PC hier übertragen, also das dauert einige Zeit*g* aber dann gehts weiter 23.10.2004, 22:05
sooo ein neuer (kurzer ) -> warte auf euer Feedback
As Luke drove back to the diner, his mind had time to wander. At first, he was able to concentrate on shipment orders and frying burgers but soon his thoughts circled around the âencounter of the third kindâ with Lorelai Gilmore today. He somehow couldnât judge her behaviour, he suspected that there was a soft side to her, a time when she let her guards down. He noticed that she was incredibly beautiful, even (or rather: especially) when she was pissed at someone and babbling about. He couldnât forget her piercing blue eyes that held that certain sparkle within, the full lips and her fragile figure. âStop thinking about herâ he scolded himself âShe wouldnât date a guy like you, I mean sheâs the most eligible bachelorette in the nationâ So he tried to drag his mind off Lorelai and focused on the street in front of him but no matter how hard he tried, her enigmatic eyes just kept popping up in his mind. âGod, look how pathetic I got, like a teenagerâ he shook his head in disbelief.
) -> warte auf euer Feedback As Luke drove back to the diner, his mind had time to wander. At first, he was able to concentrate on shipment orders and frying burgers but soon his thoughts circled around the âencounter of the third kindâ with Lorelai Gilmore today. He somehow couldnât judge her behaviour, he suspected that there was a soft side to her, a time when she let her guards down. He noticed that she was incredibly beautiful, even (or rather: especially) when she was pissed at someone and babbling about. He couldnât forget her piercing blue eyes that held that certain sparkle within, the full lips and her fragile figure. âStop thinking about herâ he scolded himself âShe wouldnât date a guy like you, I mean sheâs the most eligible bachelorette in the nationâ So he tried to drag his mind off Lorelai and focused on the street in front of him but no matter how hard he tried, her enigmatic eyes just kept popping up in his mind. âGod, look how pathetic I got, like a teenagerâ he shook his head in disbelief.
23.10.2004, 23:42
oooh süà luke schwärmt von lores augen..
guuuut,weiter!
guuuut,weiter!
24.10.2004, 00:23
nnnnaja, nachdem dieser Teil euch nicht grade begeistert hat ( :heul: ) stell ich einfach noch einen rein
There was a soft knock on the door before the secretary came in tentatively âMiss Gilmore, a woman named Mia called today, she said it was about the Independence Inn and you should please call her back, hereâs her numberâ âThanks Gracieâ Lorelai stared out of the window, somehow oblivious to the outside world. Gracie had never seen her boss like this but whatever it was, she was glad it had happened cause today was the first time that her boss had thanked her for anything or hadnât snapped at her right away. âSo, if you need anything, Iâll be outsideâ with that, she retreated quietly.
Lorelai let her gaze wander over the skyline of New York as it lay bathed in late fall sunlight, passing over the Empire State, the Chrysler Building and the open wound that 9/11 left in place of the World Trade Center. Along with her gaze, her mind began to wander. Why did she feel so giddy inside, like she wanted to smile all the time? Did it have anything to do with the gruffy yet sensible diner/coffee guy she got stuck with this morning? âHe probably was so glad to finally get away from me, Iâve been nothing but horrible to him all the time. Yup, Iâve used all my weaponsâ she mentally ticked them off âYelling, snapping, being grumpy, snarlingâ¦. anything else? Nah, I think thatâs enough to ensure that heâll never wanna see me again.â Sighing miserably she reluctantly turned back to her work but her mind chose another path.
âHe was quite handsome with this stubble of his and if I remember correctly he did have a very fine butt⦠Geez, what am I doing thinking about this guyâs buttâ¦. It had a nice shape to it though⦠Not too wobbly, just something to grab on to-â âSTOP! This is unbelievable, Iâm fantasizing about some guy I only met a few hours ago, to whom I talked for about half an hour and who probably had already forgotten that I existed when he walked out the door.â
She couldnât have been more wrong though, because Luke didnât forget about her at all, in fact he tried everything to do so, but he had no luck. He couldnât get her out of the system and even though heâd lie through his teeth if prompted, he didnât want to. But Luke never talked about this to anyone, not his sister Liz nor his parents because he knew that theyâd only shatter his hopes by telling him that she was way out of his league, something that he managed to ignore for the time being.
There was a soft knock on the door before the secretary came in tentatively âMiss Gilmore, a woman named Mia called today, she said it was about the Independence Inn and you should please call her back, hereâs her numberâ âThanks Gracieâ Lorelai stared out of the window, somehow oblivious to the outside world. Gracie had never seen her boss like this but whatever it was, she was glad it had happened cause today was the first time that her boss had thanked her for anything or hadnât snapped at her right away. âSo, if you need anything, Iâll be outsideâ with that, she retreated quietly.
Lorelai let her gaze wander over the skyline of New York as it lay bathed in late fall sunlight, passing over the Empire State, the Chrysler Building and the open wound that 9/11 left in place of the World Trade Center. Along with her gaze, her mind began to wander. Why did she feel so giddy inside, like she wanted to smile all the time? Did it have anything to do with the gruffy yet sensible diner/coffee guy she got stuck with this morning? âHe probably was so glad to finally get away from me, Iâve been nothing but horrible to him all the time. Yup, Iâve used all my weaponsâ she mentally ticked them off âYelling, snapping, being grumpy, snarlingâ¦. anything else? Nah, I think thatâs enough to ensure that heâll never wanna see me again.â Sighing miserably she reluctantly turned back to her work but her mind chose another path.
âHe was quite handsome with this stubble of his and if I remember correctly he did have a very fine butt⦠Geez, what am I doing thinking about this guyâs buttâ¦. It had a nice shape to it though⦠Not too wobbly, just something to grab on to-â âSTOP! This is unbelievable, Iâm fantasizing about some guy I only met a few hours ago, to whom I talked for about half an hour and who probably had already forgotten that I existed when he walked out the door.â
She couldnât have been more wrong though, because Luke didnât forget about her at all, in fact he tried everything to do so, but he had no luck. He couldnât get her out of the system and even though heâd lie through his teeth if prompted, he didnât want to. But Luke never talked about this to anyone, not his sister Liz nor his parents because he knew that theyâd only shatter his hopes by telling him that she was way out of his league, something that he managed to ignore for the time being.